Saturday, September 15, 2018

Words for Wednesday Writing Prompt

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Coffee with Peppy introduced me to Muted Mumblings' Words for Wednesday writing prompt. The challenge appealed to me and I decided to give it a try today.  I chose Delores' prompt words left, bachelor, dripping, movies, doorway, mansion.  My fictional story is called 'Joel and Brad'.



Joel and Brad

Joel lived in San Francisco, California.  He was a handsome man, tall with the brightest blue eyes.  He actually looked more attractive in person than in his photos.  He came from a smart and wealthy family, his mother was a lawyer and his father was a businessman who sold his first company for 50 million dollars.  Joel  was a good student and graduated university with a computer science degree. He was offered a high paying job with a technology company right out of school.  He was a proud, gay man, a bachelor comfortable with who he was.

Joel was 26 when he met  Brad while on vacation in Thailand.  He was emerging from the warm, blue ocean dripping wet when he laid eyes on Brad mingling on the beach with a group of friends.  It might have been love at first sight for both of them.  Brad was a published writer, 5 years older than Joel. They were so different from each other, yet they complemented each other.  Equally good looking, Brad had a more outgoing personality while Joel was more introverted.  Joel would sooner go to the movies than to a party.  Brad told Joel he was initially attracted to his good looks and then fascinated by his intelligence.

 Brad left his hometown of Chicago to be with Joel, as he could write from anywhere.  After two years of dating, they were married in a lavish ceremony at Joel’s parents’ mansion.   Brad remembered how stunning Joel looked when he first appeared through a doorway leading to the outdoor patio where the ceremony took place.

The couple had always wanted to have children of their own.  It wasn’t long before they hired a surrogate to carry their children.   When the surrogate miscarried, it was the most painful time for Joel and Brad.  They decided to try again and this time they were able to have twins, a boy and a girl.  Joel revealed to his parents that the boy with the bright blue eyes was his biological son while the daughter was Brad’s biological daughter.

Life is now so happy for Joel and Brad, every day they feel such gratitude for having been blessed with their perfect family.

21 comments:

Valerie-Jael said...

Good story, well done. Hugs, Valerie

Lorraine said...

Very well written! You've added details and feelings and really made that story come alive.

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Wonderful story!

Adam said...

Nice arrangement

Jenn Jilks said...

Nicely done!

JFM said...

A true romance with a happy ending...perfect!!!

Cindi said...

good use of the words

Chris Lally said...

You were up to the challenge, Christine!
Really well done!

Anonymous said...

Wonderfully done, Christine! I like that happy ending :)

Elephant's Child said...

This is truly lovely and an excellent use of the prompts.

only slightly confused said...

Sounds like a recipe for a perfect life. I hope it all works out well for them.

lissa said...

good, happy story. I didn't even know you write fiction. or is this nonfiction? hard to tell, you might try putting a fiction or nonfiction label on this post

I might give this writing prompt a try.

have a lovely day.

Gloria Baker said...

absolutely nice Christine!

peppylady (Dora) said...

I enjoy this challenge and look forward to next one.
Coffee is on

Christine said...

It is fiction although my preference in reading is non fiction. Also it is based on real stories I have heard.

sandy said...

Oh i like that story - captivating, kept my attention and ended very nice!

River said...

This is lovely, thanks for joining in with Words for Wednesday. The words are supplied by a different person each month, this month it is Delores, next month will be someone else, Delores will let us know where to go for October's words if you'd like to keep going.

Lowcarb team member said...

I do like the flowers, such a nice colour.
Enjoyed your story too :)

All the best Jan

Christine said...

Thanks River.

Kay said...

Oh gosh... I do love happy endings.

Vest said...

Your story line is definitely differing from the norm.