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Coffee with Peppy introduced me to Muted Mumblings' Words for Wednesday writing prompt. The challenge appealed to me and I decided to give it a try today. I chose Delores' prompt words left, bachelor, dripping, movies, doorway, mansion. My fictional story is called 'Joel and Brad'.
Brad left his hometown of Chicago to be with Joel, as he could write from anywhere. After two years of dating, they were married in a lavish ceremony at Joel’s parents’ mansion. Brad remembered how stunning Joel looked when he first appeared through a doorway leading to the outdoor patio where the ceremony took place.
Joel and Brad
Joel lived in San Francisco, California. He was a handsome man, tall with the brightest blue eyes. He actually looked more attractive in person than in his photos. He came from a smart and wealthy family, his mother was a lawyer and his father was a businessman who sold his first company for 50 million dollars. Joel was a good student and graduated university with a computer science degree. He was offered a high paying job with a technology company right out of school. He was a proud, gay man, a bachelor comfortable with who he was.
Joel was 26 when he met Brad while on vacation in Thailand. He was emerging from the warm, blue ocean dripping wet when he laid eyes on Brad mingling on the beach with a group of friends. It might have been love at first sight for both of them. Brad was a published writer, 5 years older than Joel. They were so different from each other, yet they complemented each other. Equally good looking, Brad had a more outgoing personality while Joel was more introverted. Joel would sooner go to the movies than to a party. Brad told Joel he was initially attracted to his good looks and then fascinated by his intelligence.
Brad left his hometown of Chicago to be with Joel, as he could write from anywhere. After two years of dating, they were married in a lavish ceremony at Joel’s parents’ mansion. Brad remembered how stunning Joel looked when he first appeared through a doorway leading to the outdoor patio where the ceremony took place.
The couple had always wanted to have children of their own. It wasn’t long before they hired a surrogate to carry their children. When the surrogate miscarried, it was the most painful time for Joel and Brad. They decided to try again and this time they were able to have twins, a boy and a girl. Joel revealed to his parents that the boy with the bright blue eyes was his biological son while the daughter was Brad’s biological daughter.
Life is now so happy for Joel and Brad, every day they feel such gratitude for having been blessed with their perfect family.
21 comments:
Good story, well done. Hugs, Valerie
Very well written! You've added details and feelings and really made that story come alive.
Wonderful story!
Nice arrangement
Nicely done!
A true romance with a happy ending...perfect!!!
good use of the words
You were up to the challenge, Christine!
Really well done!
Wonderfully done, Christine! I like that happy ending :)
This is truly lovely and an excellent use of the prompts.
Sounds like a recipe for a perfect life. I hope it all works out well for them.
good, happy story. I didn't even know you write fiction. or is this nonfiction? hard to tell, you might try putting a fiction or nonfiction label on this post
I might give this writing prompt a try.
have a lovely day.
absolutely nice Christine!
I enjoy this challenge and look forward to next one.
Coffee is on
It is fiction although my preference in reading is non fiction. Also it is based on real stories I have heard.
Oh i like that story - captivating, kept my attention and ended very nice!
This is lovely, thanks for joining in with Words for Wednesday. The words are supplied by a different person each month, this month it is Delores, next month will be someone else, Delores will let us know where to go for October's words if you'd like to keep going.
I do like the flowers, such a nice colour.
Enjoyed your story too :)
All the best Jan
Thanks River.
Oh gosh... I do love happy endings.
Your story line is definitely differing from the norm.
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